In Our Bed In our bed it used to be the two of us exploring every curve and crevice, the softest kiss lightening through our veins, the lightest touch an invasion and sweet victory. It use to be when we lay together in our bed, our skin would touch and burn as we drew ever closer trying to melt and mold our two bodies into one. And then it happened... Now, in our bed a chaste kiss goodnight before we battle for the blankets and torment each other with the touch of icy toes. As we sleep in our bed in the cold our bodies unconsciously move together searching for warmth between our skin and in the heat, just as easily our bodies drift apart. In our bed you back is no stranger like the back of my hand I can trace the pattern of you freckles. In the morning I kick and nudge you awake and we speak with noses turned and still, in the morning the first thing we see is Ourselves, reflected in Our eyes, in Our bed.
Margaret Drew's questions:
In general, what do you honestly think?
Should I leave the "Ourselves" and the "Our" capitalized in the last two lines?
This poem is not about love lost, but experiencing a oneness, or completeness with a lifetime partner, husband, or wife. Is this clear or do I need to get back to work?