Put a smile on your face Why is it that you feel you must see my happiness? My happiness is found not in my face, but in my face reflected on the surface of a calm lake, with a fish swimming through it.
Hugh Kingston's questions:
1. I've got a title this time, but does it seem a little too cheesy?
2. Does the first stanza put too much of a negative spin on it, or does it
set the other two stanzas up nicley. I cant tell.
3. What did the fish image make you think of? I dont want people to think
I'm a Jesus freak.
4. Does it need more?