Scars “Stone them that offend Me, Until they are dead!” So says War And so the stones fly Striking another soul Infecting, festering At the injustice A father shows his son the scars And whispers in his ear “Avenge me!” To the 7th generation The stone will be remembered The messanger is always punished And his message is often undelivered That which binds us together Is not something made of flesh But a electric connection Forged by the gods long ago No one can hear Over the screaming of the sky And Peace goes on strike Sickened by the stones
Dana L Pertermann's questions:
1.) What is more important in a poem: cohesiveness or meter? Readability or emotional output?
2.) Is it important for a poem to invoke emotion?