Succubus Sluice, bitter, one kiss, my lips to your eyes withered and soft wet cocoons of distance dancing, away from everything you ever knew and I loved you in my own way, I really loved you Lily, dying in my hands manipulated and drunk in your enormous shadow whispering smeared white gifts of love in the cool black bed of your man the enormous wax love hangs limply beneath a dirty sordid goddess resurrected in the confession of your deadliest hour
Syyd Raven's questions:
Question 1 Does the reader experience a sense of
subterfuge between the title and content?
Question 2 Is it clear there is a feeling of an
ending of a relationship by word play?
Question 3 Would the poem have more meaning were it
titled "Confessore"?