untitled Square meals are on square plates, composed preferably of ice cubes, and a Big Cheese instills guilt, both in and out of the office. Sucking up never helps, sucking in is usually the consequence, exposing ribs, not careers. Bringing Home the Bacon only wears out the yellow page with the moving company's number, and trust me, you're not moving up, you're moving away. Chewing the Cud, (Caution unknown nutritional value) 40 chews per bite, swallowing dilligently and never gulping may self-induce vomitting, possibly the reason for a rising suicide rate, but I know it's because Life is Just a Bowl of Cherries.
Laryssa Wirstiuk's questions:
What do you think of the way each idea flows into the
other?
Can you understand what I mean to say? What impression
do you get from this poem - I'm interested to know what
it means to the readers.
Do you have any syntax suggestions?