ROOM
     By Chris Cashmont
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 You sit in front of the machine which sits on the desk which stands on the floor of the room, a small room though not as small as many of the other rooms you have written in over the years.
 Where do you begin again, you who have never sold but one poem, you who have been called the finest unpublished writer in the country, you who have never been able to decide if you are a genius because of some of the things you have written, or an idiot because only one friend has acknowledged you. You have heard it all, the contemptuous cliches about perseverance, the naive tripe about opportunity that not only keeps you from touching reality but...
"You must stay in your room."
"Why?"
"Because"
"Because what?"
 There is never an explication that suits you. It is only that there are others who have a say, sometimes a large say, over what you do. They have always been there, since the earliest moment you can recall. You have rebelled against them, cooperated with them, cajoled them. You have showed your hand to them, bluffed them, walked away from the table. Once, when you were winning big, you burned their money in a clear glass ash tray. For that, and for that above all else, for that alone, for that beyond any other explication, they have never forgiven you. Even those who were not there, those who may not have even been in the city, those who may have been perched in their offices in another state or eyed in the vineyard in some foreign country know that you did it. No, they can not tell you that you took a match to the greenbacks. Such an idea would never enter their mind. If you had been insightful you could have invested that money for forty four years. If you had been generous you could have fed a family of those you don't know for a month or more. If you had combined the two things you could have kept a family alive for a lifetime.
 Instead, you are now in your room, in your little box, and though it is not as small as some of the other boxes you have written your way from, it is still a box, solid white but for the brown carpet. You have had to bring all the other color to it yourself, the cards, the post cards, the paintings, the photographs. The yellow lamp, the red flashlight, the chestnut dresser, the gray writing machines. And the books, history hooks, novels, bibles, poetry,
science, mythology, politics, painting, music, backpacking, massage, chess, telephone, checkbooks, coupons, not to mention the folders and files full with your own work, red, gray, black, brown, blue, green; and the writing tablets.
 You decide to begin with the photographs, one of Rilke, the other of Monk. There are also two framed photographs of the (Here you need to leave your room for a moment because the one thing you, no, the two things you do not have in the room is a decent atlas and a decent memory. You have a small atlas, one of those TIME desk reference things. This in fact stands in front of one of the in question photographs, atop your other desk, with the thesaurus and dictionary, the three books snugly kept within the box of its cardboard frame. Your memory too is this way. It is not until you have gone out into the front room, been tempted by the television and it's disastrous flood stories, and actually carried the atlas back to your cubicle that you recall without needing to open the book that the name of the mountains are the...) Grand Tetons that you tell yourself should be hung on the wall, not standing on the desk, slanted against the white wall obscured by reference books, oriental bottles, orange marmalade jars that are now used for storing pennies and pens, a plastic bottle of anti-fungi powder, a taller bottle also plastic, of Aloe Vera Gel, a note pad, a metal measuring tape and a post card with sixteen moves from a mail game of chess.
 These photographs are not your concern at the moment though. The two photographs you wanted to look at with a much closer eye, which you wanted to attempt to describe, are those of Monk and Rilke. They are off to your left and alternate with two other post cards (paintings by Henry Miller), full of color, all standing on the window sill, angled like the framed photographs, only these are held up by the cheap white blinds. Your postcards are in black and white, the Rilke and the Monk that is. They are both wearing suits, white shirts, silk ties. Rilke wears a vest too, and he stands in front of a window, one of which has blinds just like the ones in your room. This discovery gives you an eerie feeling. It is the same kind of strange coincidence you have found in his poetry. You do not let this sidetrack you for long though. You think about the Sonnets to Orpheus the Dueno Elergies, The Spanish Dancer, The Panther, the fingers trudging through the snowy piano keys; but then you pass over to Monk whose suit is lighter than Rilke's, gray, or perhaps green whereas Rilke's is almost definitely black. Rilke leaves a shadow on the window. Not Monk; he is up against a darker background and the lighting is from up above, brightest just under the eyes and on the top of his cap, a round cap which probably has a name, a name you do not know. This is one of your problems. You do not know the names to so many things. The great writers you have known, those you have read, no need to name them, seem to know the names of everything. You are trying to think of an example of this, a part to a sewing machine, some obscure thing that only a tailor's son would know, or the name of a flower. Nothing comes to mind, though at the time you read these things you made a note of it. You looked them up later. You wrote the definitions down on a sheet of paper and you used this list like a pallet. You used these words in your own tales, words you no longer remember the meanings to. You made strange images from this mixing of unlikely words, nearly alliterated your way to arpeggios of obscurity. To those few you let read it, it was completely obscure, as obscure as Rilke's suit or Monk's background, as obscure as the Romantics were to Ivor Winters, or Roy's poems to Manny.
 This fiction, of course, has not been created yet. Roy and Manny are as of yet merely ideas in your room. There are no photographs of these characters as there are of Monk or of Rilke. Imagine, creating a room full of writers, all failures like yourself, writers who need to work at doing something else because they have not even sold that one poem you sold, that poem you received one dollar for, a dollar you probably should have framed and hung on the wall with the framed photographs of the Grand Tetons, which also should probably be hung on the wall.
 You question whether this way of writing will ever help anyone, you who for a long time (have not been certain which is which, whether or weather) have believed that all art has mysterious qualities, that it links you to some necessary ingredient that nothing else except perhaps love, perhaps (prayer, perhaps meditation) sex (you like these forks in the road. You can imagine your novel being like this, both Monkish and Rilkonian,  (Rilkenian?), the high road and the low road simultaneously.
 
 

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